A Graduation Gift From My Boss

Mar 21, 2016 23:02
Today, my boss and his wife gave me a suit as a celebration for my graduation and my new job.

We first went to a clothing mall to measure my body size.

Then, they bought a very nice suit set and presented it to me.

After that, we went to a cool italian restaurant and I was treated to a wonderful dinner.

I am really full of gratitude.

I am planning to present a special gift to my boss in the day of the graduation ceremony.
先生からの卒業祝い

今日は指導教員の先生とその奥さんから、卒業/就職祝いに今後の仕事のためのスーツを頂きました。

私たちはまず、サイズを測るため、一緒にお店に行きました。

そして、とても素敵なスーツ一式を買ってくれました。

その後は、オシャレなイタリアンのお店で、美味しいディナーをご馳走になりました。

本当に感謝の気持ちでいっぱいです。

卒業式の日には、私の方からプレゼントを贈る予定です。
No. 1　nemandi's correction
  • A Graduation Gift From My Boss
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Today, my boss and his wife gave me a suit as a celebration for my graduation and my new job.
  • Today, my boss and his wife gave me a suit as a in celebration for of my graduation and my new job.
  • We first went to a clothing mall to measure my body size.
  • We first went to a clothing mall store to take my measurements. measure my body size.
  • Then, they bought a very nice suit set and presented it to me.
  • Then, they bought a very nice suit set and presented it to me.
  • After that, we went to a cool italian restaurant and I was treated to a wonderful dinner.
  • After that, we went to a cool nice Italian restaurant and I was treated to a wonderful dinner.
    　"Cool" sounds kind of weird here...I don't usually think of an Italian restaurant being "cool" or "hip".
  • I am really full of gratitude.
  • I am really grateful for all of this. full of gratitude.
  • I am planning to present a special gift to my boss in the day of the graduation ceremony.
  • I am planning to present a special gift to my boss in on the day of the graduation ceremony.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! (^^)
No. 2　Echokame's correction
  • A Graduation Gift From My Boss
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I am really full of gratitude.
  • I am really grateful.
  • I am planning to present a special gift to my boss in the day of the graduation ceremony.
  • I am planning to present a special gift to my boss the day of my graduation ceremony.
Wow, Kanotown, your English has improved quite a bit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's been months since I've read your posts. You are doing great!
Toru
Thank you so much for the corrections and you comment!
Haha, I'm not sure but I believe that I've grown bit by bit :D
No. 3　スイちゃん's correction
なんと素敵な先生です！
ぜひプレゼントと手紙を用意してください。
Toru
はい、素敵な先生です (^^)
気持ちを込めてプレゼントと手紙を贈ろうと思います！
No. 4　Seralt's correction
  • A Graduation Gift From My Boss
  • A Graduation Gift from my Supervisor
    　タイトルでは、前置詞と冠詞は普段小文字です。

    boss -> employer (ie, workplace setting)
    supervisor -> used in grad school
  • Today, my boss and his wife gave me a suit as a celebration for my graduation and my new job.
  • Today, my supervisor and his wife gave me a suit in celebration of me graduating and getting a new job.
  • Then, they bought a very nice suit set and presented it to me.
  • Then, they bought a very nice three-piece suit and presented it to me.
    　three-piece suit: jacket + vest + pants

    "suit set" といわれたら、accessories も含んでいるかなーって思い込みます。
  • I am planning to present a special gift to my boss in the day of the graduation ceremony.
  • I am planning to present a special gift to my supervisor (on) the day of my graduation ceremony.
Congrats!
I'm a few years behind you, but I'll also be working hard towards my PhD, hopefully! :)
Toru
Thank you very much for the corrections and your comment!
Oh, that's nice! I hope that your work will go well (^^)
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